Mohammed Hassan (Piracy In The Mediterranean)

Rookie (3/3/1990 / Al Iskandarī yah)

The Same Blue Daybreak


the same footsteps that I take
in the same roads that I walk
with the same sins that I make
about the same love I never had

the same love war that I never won
with the same homesick that mourns
over the same torn bodies gowns
chanting the same old succors hands

though there's nothing I can do
but the same old sacrifices
that won't ever let me down

I live the same cold nights alone
that I spend entirely awake
till the same blue daybreak

Submitted: Monday, July 05, 2010

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  • Rookie - 897 Points Saadat Tahir (7/12/2010 9:23:00 AM)

    the same footsteps that I take
    in the same roads that I walk
    with the same sins that I make
    the same.........the same..................the same.............

    does aything ever change...for the better...... here abouts

    very touching and strong lines folded in well with a composure and liuistic finesse

    well done

    cheers (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Omar Ibrahim (7/7/2010 11:57:00 AM)

    well I think that is the life..never be sad for an affliction and never be happy for a gift......men are born to pray, build and do good...so it's good to sacrifice anyway
    thanks for sharing
    (ana ro7t iskendereya el esboo3 elly fat we la2etha agmal bekeer men el sana elly fatet....we mesh za7ma we nedeefa we met3'ayyara howwa eh elly 7asal?) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 13 Points Reem Ehab (7/5/2010 6:51:00 AM)

    the same words that I will always say.. you are a distinctive extraordinary poet..your poems are so meaningful..and this one is a stunner.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lady Grace (7/5/2010 3:18:00 AM)

    well delivered..

    the same blue skies
    of white sparkling shadows
    a moon shines
    from the borrowed meadows... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie John Knight (7/5/2010 3:03:00 AM)

    Mohammed - There is an ineviable sameness baout all our lives and when yoy get older it gets worse. Sme roads - sins - inrequtied love - homesickness - sacrifices - cold nights and blue daybreaks. But take heart you are only 20 - you have your whole life to lok forward to. In 50 years time (when you are 7! ! !) you will write a very different poem celebrating yor diversity! ! ! ! Thanks for sharing - Yours through poetry - JOHN. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Zaynab Elzain (7/5/2010 12:49:00 AM)

    after this poem i don't think that i feel the same...lol, cause u just make think about the samething lol (Report) Reply

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