Analissa Range

Rookie (July 25,1990 / Minnesota)

The World Around Me - Poem by Analissa Range

The world around me
Is like a gold lined tomb
A Beautiful work of art
That holds hidden dangers

The world around me
Is like a rubber band streched tight
The tention keeps building and building
Untill it breaks with a painfull snap

The world around me
Is like a screen saver
a picture created by someone else
to hide the wrongs of others

The world around me
is like a golden treasure
fought over through time
to be possesed by only one

Comments about The World Around Me by Analissa Range

  • Rookie . . (1/22/2009 10:49:00 AM)

    what wonderful and realistic metaphors. you really do a great job of characterizing the world as you see it and showing how to live is a beautiful and risky thing at the same time. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Mia Satterthwaite (8/23/2008 11:46:00 PM)

    Hello I love this poem, very real and true at times. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 23, 2008

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