Spring without you
Rash
Flowers without you
Clash
Life is the worthless
Cash
I'll give you my soul
Stash
(2009/3/15)
I know very well this feeling showed here... yes, sometimes we feel worthless if the most precious part of us is far away... please read my poem 'About Dama' (on how I wanted her before and how I miss her now) .
imaginative creation nice rhymes, and nice choice of words....10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The layout of this poem with every second line having only one word works really well. The poem is so well thought out and my favorite two lines 'Flowers without you clash'. Well done Persian! A ten from me. Karin Anderson