The Wrong Catch Poem by Tiffanie Lein

The Wrong Catch

Rating: 5.0


maybe tomorrow i'll forget
the songs you sang the things you said
that cast out miles and miles of net
but i guess too bad, the heart was dead.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K. V. Venkataramana 04 April 2008

The lines of your poem linger long after it has been read. A lovely poem.

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Shannon Wright 24 January 2008

another ten for me. i love how the name of the poem isn't in the body yet you tied it in with the miles and miles of net. very clever. -shannon

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Kee Thampi 22 January 2008

tomorrow i'll forget the songs you sang the things you said that cast out miles and miles of net but i guess too bad, the heart was dead. a cynic in real life of love

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Subbaraman N V 12 December 2007

What a simple yet very effective verse! Thanks for sharing!

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