So has become sad
The yesterday's bride,
As the cherry garden
After harvesting...
This powerfully suggestive metaphor is expressed quite delicately. Well done! Rgds, Ivan
A nice metaphor in just four lines, beautifully suggestive, as Ivan commented...10
This has all the subtlety and eloquence of a Haiku poem. Beautiful. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Has a sadness all of it's own Tsira - - and told in so few words too...... lovely....10 from Fay...xxx
Tsira, Soft and so lovely...like jam on hot bread!
I like this a lot, it says a lot in so few words, 10 Lynda xx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
My friend that as brought a nice smile to my face Chris and you take care lady x