There Are Times /I Am Just Not Alright Poem by Shalom Freedman

There Are Times /I Am Just Not Alright

Rating: 5.0


THERE ARE TIMES/ I AM JUST NOT ALRIGHT

There are times
I am just not alright
Restless and confused
Unable to write
Trying and not doing anything
Repeating myself as now
With what has failed many times
I am just not alright now
Reporting
On my being not alright
And expecting this means something
When in my mind I know
I am writing just to feel alright
And feeling a bit better now
Still unable to make it
Completely alright
As I am not now.

Thursday, March 12, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: feeling,writing
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sylvia Frances Chan 12 March 2020

I am writing just to feel alright And feeling a bit better now Still unable to make it Completely alright As I am not now..........................Most brilliant poem about abel and inability Amazingly worded about feeling better after writing a poem. Now the circle is round and perfect. A 10+++++

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 March 2020

I am writing just to feel alright And feeling a bit better now....../// writing is the best companion in lonely time!

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