There Lies A Devil In Me Poem by MUSAWIR RAAKH

There Lies A Devil In Me

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I was the nicest man, I ever KNOWN
But the time of good HAS BLOWN
How much patience, I have SHOWN
But other side of mine, they have to SEE
Because, there lies a devil in ME

I will chase you, I will HUNT YOU
No matter how strong, I will BENT YOU
Not replied, numberless txt, I SENT you
Now no way left to FLEE
Because' there lies a devil in ME

You ignored objection CEASELESSLY
You did corruption AIMLESSLY
You raised the tension INTENSELY
Now both of us would be FREE
Because, there lies a devil in ME

I begged you not to give the PAIN
I requested you but all in VAIN
Now see yourself get SLAIN
In your death I see the GLEE
Because, there lies a devil in ME

There Lies A Devil In Me
Saturday, October 17, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: death
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
WRITTEN IN FRUSTRATION OVER A PERSON, NOT RETURNING MY MONEY
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 19 October 2015

A very impressive poem, yes, we all have a devil inside us.

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Musawir Raakh 06 November 2015

Thanks respected dear A J, your comments are always appreciated

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Roseann Shawiak 24 October 2015

Very well written, poignant and very intense! It is very frustrating when someone borrows money and doesn't repay it. Great job of portraying your feelings and frustration! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Musawir Raakh 06 November 2015

Thanks for expressing your interest in such a deep way, loved it

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Aarzoo Mehek 07 January 2016

We all go through this emotional outburst.. very beautifully expressed Musawir.

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B Farbe 19 November 2015

nicely framed poem, nice concept too, why do u emphasis ur rhymes by writing them in bold?

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Melvina Germain 08 November 2015

I get the anger vividly and can almost hear the words spoken, a lot of pain within, so much darkness and such a lot of energy lost through this anger...Good poem.....

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Val Legend 08 November 2015

awesome...love the way u choose ur words

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Dr Antony Theodore 02 November 2015

Anger in words pictoriously written and personified in the form of the devil. very nice write. tony

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Musawir Raakh 06 November 2015

Thanks for the generous comment dear respected

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