There's No Rhythm In This Song Poem by Asif Andalib
There's No Rhythm In This Song
There's no rhythm in this song
Because you are not with me!
God has come closer to me
Because you are far away!
My nights seem longer than usual
And all my days seem monotonous!
Poetry seems like a trash
Because you are far away!
Now I don't see the red morning sun
And oh I go to bed late at night!
Now love songs only hurt me
Because you are far away!
Now I hardly take care of myself
And I seldom care what others think!
Kevin comment is a true reality written on this poem, it really nice, sweet and again a shade of dark...nice write Asif, keep writing! _Unwritten Soul
Hasn't everyone felt like this at some stage in their life? I like this poem because it is humorous but serious as well. Nice one Asif.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I like this poem Asif. It tells a whole story about the poet's life on his own. Difficult to observe oneself under trying circumstances but you have succeeded here. I also like the poem for its directness and simplicity.