They Say About The Life Poem by M. Asim Nehal

They Say About The Life

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They say ~life is beautiful
and I say it is like the spider's web
each part of our body demands
and we spread our desires for hunting our wishes
large amounts of energy are used to catch
this disguises like a mirage.

They say ~ life is wonderful
And I say how I wonder what you are
A soul inside the body, playing tug of war
the game is about to see who wins.

They say ~ Life is worth living
And I say it is so worth living for the demise
In three stages, we paint the world
Then try to rub it off.

They say ~ Life on earth is a test
And I agree with it after my experiences
Indeed, it takes us through the narrow tunnel
Of emotions, relationships and betrayals
then lays us to the rest in muddy grave

A needle's eye to take the camel through
Pure like honey, odorless like olive oil
Fresh like ice and innocent as a dove.

Wednesday, September 12, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 September 2018

very original and creative But please remember a thing or two read my poems inspired by sir uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

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Kumarmani Mahakul 12 September 2018

A beautiful philosophical poem on life has been astutely and touchingly inscribed. My favorite lines are..... They say ~ Life on earth is a test And I agree with it after my experiences Indeed, it takes us through the narrow tunnel Of emotions, relationships and betrayals then lays us to the rest in muddy grave

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Mahtab Bangalee 12 September 2018

nicely penned the scrutiny of life

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