They Say Life Is ~ Poem by M. Asim Nehal

They Say Life Is ~

Rating: 5.0


They say ~ life is beautiful
And I say it is like the spider's web
Each part of our body demands
And we spread our desires
Sticky like silk for hunting our wishes
and uses large amounts of energy
To catch them, this disguises like a mirage

They say ~ life is wonderful
And I say how I wonder what you are
A soul inside the body
Playing tug of war to win over another

They say ~ Life is worth living
And I say it is so worth living for dyeing
In three stages, painting the world
Then trying to rub it off

They say ~ Life on earth is a test
And I agree with it after forty years
Indeed, it takes us through the narrow tunnel
Of the life passing from the Grave

A needle's eye to take the camel through
Pure like honey, odourless like olive oil
Fresh like ice and innocent as a dove.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tihama Frank 15 June 2021

A descriptive poem on life, a trail of life towards death, a complete journey

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Darren Jkoeryo 15 June 2021

DJ liked your philosophical poem on life. Full points.

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Susan Williams 17 June 2021

Life is worth living And I say it is so worth living for dyeing In three stages, painting the world Then trying to rub it off---------------------that is awesome writing

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Poetic Sky 16 June 2021

Thoughtful poem...They say ~ life is beautiful

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Profound and insightful, Asim ji......100%

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KAVIN CHARALAN 15 June 2021

Life's philosophy well said

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Indira Renganathan 15 June 2021

An honest thought and write on life...I totally agree with your views...5*****

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