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They say dreams never do come true.
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They say dreams never do come true..
But they are wrong, I say they do
I dream of violence, I dream of hurt
I dream of children, they live in dirt
I dream of you, I dream of me
I dream of how this was never meant to be
I dream of my feelings, I dream of my thoughts
I dream of these things, I dream of them lots
I dream of my loved ones, I dream of the dead
I dream of these thoughts, exploding my head
I dream of you yelling, I dream of you crying
I dream of you hiding, I dream of you lying
I dream of you hurting, I dream of you shutting me out of your life
I dream of the of the only one I can trust, I dream of my knife.
They say dreams never do come true,
But they are wrong, I say they do.
Sylvi Hart
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Comments about this poem (They say dreams never do come true.
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Ari Ryan (1/28/2011 9:57:00 AM)
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That was great. Very deep and full of emotion. I could really feel where you were coming from, :)
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Shanyn Austin (2/6/2010 12:50:00 PM)
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that was really good... thumbs up! :)
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Keva M. (10/23/2009 3:43:00 AM)
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... :) great! what you have wrote is now coming into reality..just look into this world...
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=Donna Oliver (8/23/2009 7:19:00 PM)
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Touching, powerful... you know how to write a poem.
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Mandy S (6/5/2009 8:39:00 AM)
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Hey Sylvia. Great poem :) Really powerful. Good job & Thumbs up
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Italo Etkin (10/9/2008 4:31:00 PM)
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this is really a fantastic poem.
great job with this
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