"If she is everything for you"
Show it to world that it is true
You care for her
Take no note of others and bother
"You are soul of my life"
"I shall love to make you as wife"
Such words seem very sweet
But evaporate when real situation greets
It is good to know lovers imagination
He may go all out for lovely relation
Surrender to any demand wish
Even may offer life to end or finish
He may go further to add
"Life shall not be any load"
He will build queen's place
Where he will see only her face
Well, it is alright to fall in love
Think more what all you can believe
Show her real dreams and your commitment
That shall be the real joyous moment
Adv Shafiqul Haque Minto nice 12 hours ago · Unlike · 1
Joyous FirstTimothy Sanders23 hours ago Keep writing. Keep sharing. Comment +1
good theme Dushyant Bhola22 hours ago If.....is everything for you Show it to the world that it is true.... Means that if something is truth, then the truth should be visible also. Nice write. Check out some of my work, if possible. I will appreciate.
Nice form Randy Witte22 hours ago And flow. the rhythm is without hiccups and dresses the message subtly but well. Thank you. Comment +1
good Michelle Angel22 hours ago the vocabulary could be improved.
Re: Think more (Score: 1) by zbird on Friday, June 27,2014 (08: 31: 13) good advice
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
“If she is everything for you” Show it to world that it is true