This Love Of Ours Poem by Safiyyah Manjra

This Love Of Ours

Rating: 5.0


Love's partition.
A mathematical statement in cognition.

Bellowed by the arms of turmoil,
Drenched in asphalt oil.

Darkened as obsidian.
Since when did this begin to feel foreign?

A flowing river,
That meets no trickle by the touch of laughter.

Constant definition of trying.
With momentarily soft tears of crying.

Time is being eaten.
The clock's chime is unforgotten.

A questionable path,
Once an assertive hath.

Wanting that again which has been lost.
Sure does come with a cost.

Sunday, May 31, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: fun,heart love,heartache,love,love and friendship
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Me Poet Yeps Poet 31 May 2020

so fantastic a poet are ye how all these days I missed thee now read ppme MOMS SMI PLUS MORE IF U CARE TOLES PL

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Kostas Lagos 31 May 2020

A fabulous poem! Enjoyed reading it!

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George Krokos 31 May 2020

A good use of metaphor and imagery to express your thoughts of a personal nature dealing with various aspects of love. Well done.

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Safiyyah Manjra 02 June 2020

I think I will write more with this touch.

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