This Universe Inside Of Me Poem by Katty Briones

This Universe Inside Of Me



There is a whole universe inside of me
But its being sucked into a black whole
A fiery pit of hurt and anger
For some reason I don't do anything about it
I just starve until I am nothing more
Than as thin as paper
And my mother is screaming at me
“You are so much more than this! ”
I am so much more than the numbers on the box
The number on the scale yet I don't feel that way
I feel like this crushing universe is crushing me
That this dieing planet is killing me
And one day it'll go too far and I wont even be paper
Just ash made of the universe inside of me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Richard John 17 May 2014

You need to correct some of those spelling errors, but otherwise it's good more or less

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Savita Tyagi 16 May 2014

Your poem is therapy for all who go through what you expressed so uniquely. Keep writing, your universe within will grow.

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Brian Jani 16 May 2014

Nice one katty, I.enjoyed it.keep it up hey :)

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