Thiscantbelove Poem by Mr. Mackeith

Thiscantbelove



Damn she's fine!
Her hair moves in the wind so smooth.
Even when its not blowing
Walk up to her smooth, no emotion showing
Swagger like T. Cruise with no idea where I was going.
'Excuse me Miss...' I felt like Mr. Shawn Carter.
She turned around and gave me a kiss.
No talk required.
What was this?
My head spun like springs that sprung.
Landed on the floor of some hotel room in two blinks.
The words spoke from her lips,
'I Love you'
Drunken in I shout 'I Love you too'
Didnt even know her name.
What was her name?

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Viola Grey 16 August 2008

'My head spun like springs that sprung.'..... such a clever line....great work.

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Joseph Poewhit 14 August 2008

Been there what was her name - back then.

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