Those Endeavors Accomplished Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

Those Endeavors Accomplished



One can only feel a pride,
Of those endeavors accomplished.
A validated life,
Has been achieved and done.

There are not too many,
Who have been blessed this way.
To believe they can...
And over time find success.

Some may dispute the degree of it.
Since for them having money and 'things'
Reflect importance.

Then there are others who will ignore this.
Since envy and jealousy reveals their hypocrisy.
They are the ones who initially encourage.
Hoping in their hearts nothing develops or starts.

One can only feel a pride,
Of those endeavors accomplished.
A validated life,
Has been achieved and done.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Elbert Matt Loubser 16 May 2010

Those who measure their success in material worth will never be content, very true. I think that having peace at heart is achieved differently relative to each individual, and even then how can we be sure as to what we want and what we truly need?

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