Thoughts -1 Ever Changing Thoughts Poem by Geeta Radhakrishna Menon

Thoughts -1 Ever Changing Thoughts

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Thoughts are so fleeting,
Thousand wings fluttering,
Sometimes, touching the boughs of heaven,
Sometimes, seated on earth's hard rock,
At times, swimming in ocean's fantasy,
At times, blowing like a wind
From mountains to valleys,
From hills to planes,
Into new destinations,
Into unknown terrains,
Never stable,
Never still,
Ever changing
Ever moving!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeremy Horsford 06 February 2017

Sometimes nowhere, but everywhere. I'm guessing your thoughts will carry on through the ages.

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Thank you, Jeremy, for your noble thoughts. Hope they would travel through ages not bound by time or space.

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Bill Cantrell 10 June 2016

Our thoughts carry us to such heights, unleashing emotions of both wonder and fascination, I enjoyed your thoughts within this wonderful poem.

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Ayman Parray 21 August 2015

I think friends can have a tremendous positive effect on us even just by keeping us in their thoughts. Thanks, my friend. Your poem is so good that it inspired me to write a poem of my own. Will be sharing soon with you with a special thanks to you and I hope that you like it.

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So happy to know that the poem has inspired you to write a poem. Waiting eagerly to read your poem, Ayman!

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 19 August 2015

Truly, thoughts have wings and are always on a move You have depicted the true attributes of thoughts.

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Thank you Abdulrazak, for your kind words.

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Kelly Kurt 19 August 2015

An apt description of thoughts, Geeta. (At least my thoughts) : -)

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Hi Kelly, Thank you for the prompt comment. Ensuring these are my thoughts as well! Wonder whether our friend Ayman would join us in this fluttering thoughts parade? ? ! !

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