Jasbir Chatterjee

Freshman - 962 Points (4 March 1966 / Delhi)

Thoughts Of A Mother


My daughter would turn 10 next month…
I find it hard to believe!
It seems only yesterday
That she was born….
As my thoughts wander
Down the memory lane,
I am transported
To those restless days
In the balcony where I sat
On a low stool
With swollen feet and a heavy body
With waves of nausea and anxiety
Drowning me in the abyss of depression
Wondering if I was in for a second nightmare
Much more frightening than the last….

My daughter would complete one decade of her life next month…
I find it hard to believe!
It seems only yesterday
That she was born….
As my thoughts wander
Down the memory lane,
I am transported
To those long, peaceful days
In the balcony where I sat
On a low stool
With needles and threads of different colors
With a pink cloth and an embroidery frame
With my lips moving in a silent prayer to God
Wondering if He was going to make my daughter
As beautiful as the flowers I was embroidering…..

Submitted: Saturday, April 15, 2006

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  • Gold Star - 11,807 Points Rajnish Manga (11/16/2014 2:10:00 AM)

    The beauty of these feelings can only be felt and then expressed by a mother who weaves a thousand dreams for her baby both before and after its birth. Congratulations for this wonderful little poem in which you have recreated the scene with your pen. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 701 Points Shahzia Batool (2/27/2012 11:26:00 PM)

    this silent prayer of a mother to God...is the precious thing of all...i remember...i can never forget the time when my amma used to recite Holy verses when all were sleeping...i loved this poem... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 92 Points C. P. Sharma (9/23/2009 10:35:00 PM)

    Children are mother's dream like embroidered flowers. Very well penned mother's concern and highly poetic too.
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/27/2009 10:46:00 PM)

    all lines finely bee line to hive a mother and her attributes/ lovely (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 29,744 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (5/23/2009 9:28:00 PM)

    Mother after allmother very restless for well being oc childere. All good feelings.Kindly give mine'O, mother, kids, teacher no plese, funny 1 and hen laid eggs to your kid........hard earned 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie K. V. Venkataramana (4/5/2008 2:15:00 AM)

    How natural and beautiful a mother's feelings are! Thank you for sharing this lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Preeti - is here! (4/19/2006 2:43:00 AM)

    Beautiful!
    Do all mothers feel the same? ...i guess they do...for i saw my mother in this poem of urs.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jay P. Narain (4/15/2006 12:01:00 PM)

    Jasbir,
    Raising children is little hard but is one of the most beautfiul experience in our lives. Our children are always prettier than anything in the world. Love the last few lines of the poem.
    Jay (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (4/15/2006 11:33:00 AM)

    Charming write, Jasbir. Those last two lines were especially appealing to me.

    Warm regards,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

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