Dustin Bennefield

Rookie (Semptember 11,1991 / GA)

Through Soldiers' Eyes - Poem by Dustin Bennefield

So tense am I
The falling sky
Holding my breath
Until the Death

It’s my life
So turn the scythe
Break the bread
And stop the Lead

Loud is it
The latest cry
But all the time
Red is the Dye

A placid face
Of Death’s clean lace
The slow coming of
A century’s Race

Copyright 2006 Dustin Bennefield

Comments about Through Soldiers' Eyes by Dustin Bennefield

  • Kailynd McGregor (9/29/2006 9:09:00 AM)

    great job! you were right, i did love it! i have another poem i'm going to put on, and its about WWI so you might like it! let me know what you think!
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  • Gina PrettyBrownEyes (6/5/2006 5:05:00 PM)

    i think this is my favorite poem yet. i like the rhym and rythm in this one..evrything fits perfectly (Report) Reply

  • Anisha Notelling (6/4/2006 8:23:00 PM)

    u r SOOOOOO AWESOME! ! ! ! ! omg srry but i hardly meet guyz who r my age and can write such meaningful poetry! ! ! ! jeez....i luv u for it :) (Report) Reply

  • Margaret Smith (5/26/2006 12:12:00 PM)

    I like your imagery. This is the kind of poem I really like...it's easy to read, but the language isn't boring. (Report) Reply

  • Amber Mutt (5/18/2006 1:21:00 PM)

    touching.another reminder that war is not the noble thing some people make it seem. a needed reminder to those who can consider taking part in it. thanks 4 writing it
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  • ***** ********* (5/18/2006 12:33:00 PM)

    A sad poem of our time Dustin. I guess you must have personal experience to express so well? Thanks for reminding us, we need it. Tai (Report) Reply

  • Preeti - is here! (5/18/2006 12:31:00 PM)

    A placid face
    Of Death’s clean lace
    The slow coming of
    A century’s Race

    Brilliant poem..with a superb end! (^^^)

    Preets (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, May 18, 2006

Poem Edited: Sunday, May 28, 2006

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