Time is flowing
Like a wagon moving
Flowers are falling
With a race, perishing
Faces are fading
Of the stars mourning
Trees are falling
When the birds singing
Man alone standing
With a greed never ending
Time is flowing......
When..., only the man existing.
06-12-2011
As the saying goes TIME IS GOLD. A beautiful poem to remind us that time is fleeting as the natue and the humankind. Never regret the fleeting time used in writing such a tasteful poem....Thanks for sharing.
liked your sense of flow. keep growing.10 lots of love. abhimanyu kumar.s
Yes, time goes by really fast and we should focus more on the important things of our lives such as love, nature instead of material ones. A great idea for a poem!
i love this one, short and thoughtful! keep it up. good luck and thanks for sharing it again :)
kon kehta he k haalaat badal jaen gey waqt guzray ga tou hum sath guzar jaen gey...i think man standing alone, or apart is an illusion...man is not a separate being but the passing time casts it's effect on him indeed!
ur poems r gr8..u pot in them all kind of ideeas..love..nature..thinkings..is nice and full of soul some of them..but u must work litlle on ur englesh.r some mistakes were u can`t understand the meeneng of the word in that moment..i hope u not mad at me..i just sayng.and i cordiallly invite u to read my poems too and comment..pls.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
[Time is flowing] An excellent poem/well-penning! ! !