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TIME (PART 2) .

time starts with a new borns first breath,
time ends with someones death,
time makes you win or loose,
time makes you choose,
time is forever,
time keeps a relationship together,
time always changes,
time goes thru stages,
time is like a book it turns pages,
time gives you a raise in your wages,
time sometimes makes you a drug addict,
time helps you break the habit,
time makes you friends and enemies,
time brings back memories,
time is unpredictable,
time is unforgetable,
time gives you life,
time makes you husband and wife.

1/09/2009
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia

Submitted: Friday, January 09, 2009
Edited: Saturday, February 21, 2009


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  • HyDr0 sH0ck (1/2/2010 12:04:00 AM)

    Do you even know what time is? Go read a book. 13: 20? 12: 60? Oh, let me guess you don't know what that is.

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  • (: God's Wild Child :) (1/13/2009 1:24:00 PM)

    true i like it good job keep it up =]

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  • The Long Lost Dreamer of Dreams (1/9/2009 2:22:00 PM)

    :) very very nice and self explanable.

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