Last Letter To My Father. Poem by JOSE MURGUIA
Last Letter To My Father.
dear lost father
im writting you this letter,
its me your son
the one you left in the stormy weather,
i know theres never enough time in a day,
because im 18 and you still cant remember
that it's my birthday,
i didn't want your money
i just wanted you to show some love,
but i guess its too expensive
because you cant even afford to give me a hug,
this is the last letter that ill ever write,
maybee someday you'll understand
what you did wasnt right,
and maybee by that time
my love for you wont have a light,
so father excuse me i mean sir
this is the last letter that i'll ever write.
01/05/2009
Copyright ©2009 Jose Murguia
Join the club of dads walking out. good poem. nice structure.
I like how much feeling and emotion you put into your poems, I'm not sure if this is truth or not but you could have fooled me.
I wish i could write that 2 my mom. Also my father. You r doin great with ur poems.
Wow I can feel your hurt in your poem, may you come to know the Love of a Heavenly Father that is found in Jesus Christ the Lord. God Bless You. John 3: 16- For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life.
this poem is awesome-i like every bit of it-it's a shame good poems come from pain-10++++
Awrite that comes straight from the heart and goes straight to the heart.
this poem is great. i can visulize the pain it must have caused.
this is a very beautiful poem that you have written here Jose. I truly enjoyed it. tres bien.! Hazel G.E
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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this poem is deep touching my heart.. Great..