Tin In The Bin Poem by Edward Kofi Louis

Tin In The Bin



Tin in the bin! !
Sin in the gin,
Drunk! !
Fin,
Thin,
Within;
Over drinking,
Lin, glin!
Tin in the bin,
Pin, win!
Within;
Sin in the gin.
Quin, chin!
Thin,
Sin in the gin;
Not ready for the truth! ! ! !
Not ready for a change.

Tuesday, August 13, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: poetic expression
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Edward Kofi Louis 14 August 2019

Wicked people are not ready for the truth! ! Thanks for your comment on my poem. Stay blessed always.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 August 2019

We should accept change and truth. Nature deeply impacts life. This s an excellent poem shared.

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Aniruddha Pathak 13 August 2019

Yes. the last two lines say it all. Thanks for sharing

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