To A Pearl Poem by Sandra Feldman

To A Pearl

Rating: 5.0


Your purity astounds me,
Your beauty surrounds me,
The perfect roundness of your shape,
Your white and pinkish blend,
Your perfect smoothness, velvet craves.

The waters that have so allowed,
Your more than stunning birth,
Remind me of the Birth at Sea,
Of Venus, love on earth.

Saturday, July 25, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
When I refer to the birth of Venus I had in mind the magnificent painting of Sandro Botticelli. Please look at it if you like this poem, it's the link, thank you
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kelly Kurt 28 July 2015

I have seen the painting (Pictures of it) many times, Your poem should be posted along with it in the museum. Simply lovely!

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Ayman Parray 26 July 2015

Sandra, after seeing Botticelli's painting I can truly understand and appreciate your poem. The poem has a magical effect on me now. I can feel the birth of something pure and uplifting. The birth of love and the birth of a pure spirit, a pearl that you call Venus. Goddess of love born a new with your words. Thank you dear poet for soothing my soul... Ayman

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Now, this is Poetry in absolute...The work is imbued with crisp, tight, short cropped linage that enables the structural movement to glide from line to line like a shiny Susan B. Anthony tossed across a freshly glaced icepond...Bravo Poetess Sandra! ~FjR~

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James Mclain 25 July 2015

I'm glad to see that someone else knows more the worth of just one single grain of sand.. iip Impeccable of course.

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Darlene Walsh 25 July 2015

A lovely description of a pearl.

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