To Amanda Poem by Justin Gildow

To Amanda



Sand sifting through the hourglass
I'd fall apart for you here and now
You're my love
My one and only
The way it's meant to be
I'll drink to you
And wipe the tears from your eyes
If they should ever come

With me in your life
There's no more dark skies

I'll be there for you when the rain begins to fall
And show you the greatest love for all
Tonight will be the greatest night

I'm just sitting here holding my heart in my hands
While dreaming up ideas for the masterplan

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alex Watt 03 March 2008

i like the line 'i'm just sitting here holding my heart in my hands'. I'd fix 'there's no more' (i.e. there is no more) unless you meant to do that.

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Justin Gildow

Justin Gildow

Washington, PA
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