Hey, smiling beauty
My ravishing companion
Come into my life, to give it a lift
I shall sing for you our love's tuneful lore
Cynosure of beauty, you are
The darling of everyone's eye
I wonder how I could get through
Without you by my side
You are there to remind me
How beautiful this life is
In door or out door
I look for your company
In my solitary room you sit and smile
As I go for a walk, you are around me
You dress in pink, red and mauve
The sweet scent you carry takes my breath away
Your pervading aroma
Stirs and thrills my nerves
You hold so much poetry n' romance
On your soft crimson cheeks
I see magic hiding in your eyes
In your company, my aches I forget
You restore into me
Life's tuneful harmony
Will you stay with me
As an abiding companion
But sadly I recognize
You are a fair weather friend
My Valentine, let me kiss you in public
Steal the honey out of you
Nobody would object my act
Except perhaps a butterfly!
Somehow, without scrolling down to the image below, I could figure out you were singing about a rose. Your poem is as beautiful as the flower. Your Valentine would be immensely pleased to receive it and read the poem too. (10)
I am so happy Rajendran ji! You guessed it right! Thanks for your encouragement!
Anyone would be counted as fortunate to receive such a lovely Valentine
Beautiful valentine so beautifully you developed in the poem. We are all delighted to get this valentine.
Part - 2 forget. Thrilling expression. The concluding stanza is much impressive and meaningful, Thank you dear madam for sharing this beautiful poem on love with nice graphic, a rose the symbol of love. Full vote.
Part - 1 In this poem " My Valentine" you have delineated touchingly about the feeling of a lover towards his beloved. The lover says in your pen....In my solitary room you sit and smile / As I go for a walk, you are around me...Your pervading aroma / Stirs and thrills my nerves../ I see magic hiding in your eyes / In your company, my aches I
Beautiful romantic piece of poetry, lovely and very passionate. Thanks for sharing.
It is such a metaphorically rich poem Valsa ma'am.. The rose, as a symbol of beauty, that ultimately withers is extremely apt even for human beings.. Love is such a precious and tender sentiment, a collection of so many emotions.. But, even as I see this, as a poem simply about someone who loves flowers (I really love roses in my room all the times) , I can appreciate the beauty of it.. Sometimes all that we need is a sweet flower in our room, making it smell like love.. There is beauty in that... Thanks for sharing Valsa ma'am :)
wow that was too good a write, Rose as a Valentine, yes who will not adore that beautiful Rose in door or out door, the company is thoroughly enjoyed by everyone. Wonderful poem with superb concluding lines, loved it! ! !
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Wow! Taking the reader to a climax and dropping like a hot porridge, on to a bed of rose petals. Amazing and appealing to the day's theme.X