Treasure Island

Ali Adamson


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Companion...
I have
a breath,
a dream,
and i keep
a fear...

Submitted: Thursday, January 16, 2014
Edited: Thursday, January 16, 2014

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  • Valsa George (1/29/2014 11:06:00 PM)

    We have dreams and fears as long as we have breath!

    Brevity is the soul of wit! ! (Report) Reply

  • * Sunprincess * (1/22/2014 10:57:00 AM)

    ......I agree never go to bed angry, you may not wake up from your dream....brilliant write...I enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (1/17/2014 11:00:00 AM)

    I keep fear. Hope not. When breath and dream are near, one can also keep fear away. Hope we can do that. Beautiful short poem. Nicely expressed. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Shahzia Batool (1/16/2014 2:31:00 PM)

    I agree with the comments by Yassin and Pradip... indeed it's a brilliant short poem brother...
    an incredible apostrophe or a dramatic monologue...no matter, whether the addressee is present or absent from the scene, whether directly addressed or just imagined, but the work is dramatised in brief and intense moments, and intensity is heightened when fear is also added to be...shared! ...a marked write! (Report) Reply

  • Sallam Yassin (1/16/2014 10:00:00 AM)

    this two are real companion
    for life (breath life; dream; and fear)
    short but intense (Report) Reply

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