Ali Adamson


To Share... - Poem by Ali Adamson

Companion...
I have
a breath,
a dream,
and i keep
a fear...


Comments about To Share... by Ali Adamson

  • Gold Star - 5,942 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (2/9/2014 9:42:00 PM)

    sharp and cute message (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,939 Points Soulful Heart (2/6/2014 6:54:00 AM)

    Four words yet summing up the whole saga of relationships... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,979 Points Valsa George (1/29/2014 11:06:00 PM)

    We have dreams and fears as long as we have breath!

    Brevity is the soul of wit! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,604 Points Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi (1/29/2014 8:25:00 PM)

    call these companions can't be shared..Thank you for sharing.. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 16,990 Points * Sunprincess * (1/22/2014 10:57:00 AM)

    ......I agree never go to bed angry, you may not wake up from your dream....brilliant write...I enjoyed.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (1/20/2014 8:44:00 PM)

    brilliant in its brevity, pulls the strings of imaginations too! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (1/20/2014 8:44:00 PM)

    brilliant in its brevity, pulls the strings of imaginations too! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,357 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (1/17/2014 11:00:00 AM)

    I keep fear. Hope not. When breath and dream are near, one can also keep fear away. Hope we can do that. Beautiful short poem. Nicely expressed. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,276 Points Shahzia Batool (1/16/2014 2:31:00 PM)

    I agree with the comments by Yassin and Pradip... indeed it's a brilliant short poem brother...
    an incredible apostrophe or a dramatic monologue...no matter, whether the addressee is present or absent from the scene, whether directly addressed or just imagined, but the work is dramatised in brief and intense moments, and intensity is heightened when fear is also added to be...shared! ...a marked write! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,208 Points Sallam Yassin (1/16/2014 10:00:00 AM)

    this two are real companion
    for life (breath life; dream; and fear)
    short but intense (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,265 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (1/16/2014 6:17:00 AM)

    the three are inseparable, brilliant brevity! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 16, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, January 16, 2014


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