Esther Leclerc

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To the Sun (a Haiku)


The noonday sun
holds court in our galaxy
while earth spins her wheels


(5.24.06 - my first haiku)

Submitted: Wednesday, May 24, 2006
Edited: Thursday, May 25, 2006

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  • Rookie Sandra Fowler (4/19/2007 4:52:00 AM)

    I was looking through your poems, when I came upon this small treasure. What a lovely first. It is always satisfying to the soul to accomplish something one has never done before. Take care.

    Love,

    Sandra (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R H (2/24/2007 4:05:00 PM)

    I love this Est. Evocative and contemplative. Justine (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Robert Howard (8/16/2006 12:56:00 PM)

    According to the paper this morning our Earth has three more planets to pal around with:
    Ceres, Xena (home of the Warrior Princess?) and Charon. Isn't it grand? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Chuck Audette (6/5/2006 1:16:00 PM)

    Beautiful. But is a haiku strictly 5 syllables,7, then 5? Or just a wonderful idea expressed without excess? (in which case you have definitely succeeded) .- chuck (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Brian Dorn (6/4/2006 8:00:00 PM)

    Esther, I've never written Haiku, but when I do, I hope it's even half as profound as yours... awesome! !
    Brian (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anna Russell (6/2/2006 9:18:00 AM)

    So now I have to add mistress of Language to your already many talents, do I? Pah! Share some will ya? !
    Hugs
    Anna xxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (5/30/2006 1:37:00 PM)

    Top class, very inspirational, lots of creative thinking here, Thankyou Esther you write beautifully
    Love Duncan x (Report) Reply

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