The noonday sun
holds court in our galaxy
while earth spins her wheels
(5.24.06 - my first haiku)
Go on yirsell Esther. An a big Haiku the noo, too. Danny (Also recently converted)
Congratulations. This is great Haiku. Very clever. Regards, Alison
Top class, very inspirational, lots of creative thinking here, Thankyou Esther you write beautifully Love Duncan x
I was looking through your poems, when I came upon this small treasure. What a lovely first. It is always satisfying to the soul to accomplish something one has never done before. Take care. Love, Sandra
According to the paper this morning our Earth has three more planets to pal around with: Ceres, Xena (home of the Warrior Princess?) and Charon. Isn't it grand?
Left spinning in awe, a lovely wordsmith is you **ESTHER** love duncan X
Beautiful. But is a haiku strictly 5 syllables,7, then 5? Or just a wonderful idea expressed without excess? (in which case you have definitely succeeded) .- chuck
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Very good First try keep - em comin dave xxx