hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 34,129 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

To Walk On Edge - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Simple form
Well informed
Of intentions
Is basis for good relation!

Look at simplicity
Really graced by almighty
Nothing improbable
As it is sans trouble

It is simple cult
Free from insult
Think of no personal sake
As love can not be at stake

Love does not emanate
Without any reason to relate
It is special between hearts
Nice and memorable art

Two souls long
For not going wrong
In real life
To walk on edge of knife


Comments about To Walk On Edge by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/17/2013 5:36:00 AM)

    Rohani Daud and Nibedita Nargis Panna like this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/17/2013 12:17:00 AM)

    blue

    ryan wart20 minutes ago
    cult of it all (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Muhammad Ali (12/17/2013 12:05:00 AM)

    dear friend, greetings, after a long time i think. hope you are going well. wish you peace.
    this poem is simple, and simply deep too. i like the flow and heart in the poem. nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 34,129 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (12/16/2013 11:43:00 PM)

    Simple form
    Well informed (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, December 16, 2013

Poem Edited: Tuesday, December 17, 2013


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