Yasmeen Khan


...To Young Love - Poem by Yasmeen Khan

Your love is like a little child
Impish, prankish
My world is too fragile
It can’t sustain any brandish

Your childlike prances
Winsome words
Pleasant stances
Of a carefree nerd

Step with care
Lest you should break
Custom’s freaky, flimsy layer
And put the mores at stake

Love is sweet as honey
But dear are the faiths
Set by elders and family
That let us live in grace


Comments about ...To Young Love by Yasmeen Khan

  • Gold Star - 31,170 Points Akhtar Jawad (5/15/2014 6:10:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem with a moral, really liked it. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/29/2014 3:05:00 AM)

    Love is sweet as honey
    But dear are the faiths
    Set by elders and family
    That let us live in grace

    True lines...........can we pay back love and care that our parents have given us? ..........
    A poignant and heartfelt write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (6/29/2013 11:09:00 AM)

    love is sweet as honey. but dear are the faiths. nice thoughts. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 360 Points David Wood (6/27/2013 4:57:00 AM)

    It is by grace and love that we shall live. Nice poem Jasmeen. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,276 Points Shahzia Batool (6/27/2013 12:32:00 AM)

    But dear are the faiths
    Set by elders and family
    That let us live in grace...

    So nice a write! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 360 Points David Wood (6/24/2013 7:42:00 AM)

    True love lets you live in grace and overcome all obsticles. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, June 24, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, June 24, 2013


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