Tonight The Sea Is Calm And Fair Poem by Captain Cur

Tonight The Sea Is Calm And Fair

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Tonight the sea is calm and fair
her mind flows unperturbed
she breathes in deep the dapper air
with wholesome silent mirth;
in forests, hills and mountain beds
her drops have lightly tread
now calls from dreams to sleeping earth
and tips the lakes and streams and brooks
reclaiming back her strength.

Friday, September 21, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: sea,tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Practicing Poetess 29 September 2018

I love how you personify the sea as a 'she'. If you ever heard an old song titled 'Brandy', the sailor in that song sang, 'My Life, my Love, and my Lady is the Sea'. She gives, and she reclaims. Lovely poem.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 23 September 2018

Wonderful imaginary. Beautifully penned. Every lines are interesting to read. How sea breathes in deep the dapper air with wholesome silent mirth is touchingly inscribed. Thanks for sharing.10

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Mihaela Pirjol 21 September 2018

''she breathes in deep the dapper air'' - I love the alliteration in this verse; the entire poem has a calming touch to the ear!

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Captain Cur 21 September 2018

Thank you Mihaela, for your kind words. How tranquil the sea can be, then of course things can get quite stormy with this temperamental Lady.

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