Breanna Elwin

Rookie - 3 Points (Twin Falls, ID Buhl, ID)

Tortures - Poem by Breanna Elwin

Breathing down my neck,
Then u kiss me so sweetly,
Tie me up,
Pull me down,
Throw me round and round,
Till I fall down,
Bleeding from my arms,
Blood dripping down,
Dripping down into the pool on the floor,
Between pain and lust,
It only makes me shiver as the blood drips,
Drip, Drip, Drip it goes,
Please let my lust take over,
This torture is becoming unbearable,
Its lovely how it makes me feel so alive,
Will this torture never stop,
Don't let it stop...


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  • Veteran Poet - 1,462 Points Tiku . (7/23/2014 3:06:00 AM)

    nice poem.liked its flow and concept. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 23, 2014

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 23, 2014


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