Total Dark Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Total Dark

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Total dark
Monday,11th June 2018

It is total dark
as I can't start
for the ungrateful people
who have seen no struggle

there is the limit
at a point where you stop to greet
such people
who can be seen only ordinary individuals

I think it is a final farewell
and it must clearly tell
and also reveal
how you feel!

people may come and go
but air shall never stop to blow
the roses shall not stop spreading the fragrance
as it is mere luck by chance

I must say thank to all
especially to the energetic young editors
who not only took care to grant me an honor
but reminded me too of minor mistakes

I am not the person of giving and taking nature
so silently pursue and help all those future poets
to help and strengthen their creations
how much I did, I needn't mention

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

Total Dark
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
people may come and go
but air shall never stop to blow
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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 June 2018

people may come and go but air shall never stop to blow the roses shall not stop spreading the fragrance as it is mere luck by chance.......so touching and nice expression. A beautiful poem shared. Thank u sir.

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so nice of you mahankul

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There is no darkness at all. Light is everywhere - in and around us. Empathize with your feelings and your concern for the platform. We need to continue with the noble task at hand - of spreading our sublime poesy. Keep sharing. TFS. Annapurna Sharma, Nellore, Jun 12,2018

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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