Totally Unfair Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Totally Unfair

Rating: 5.0


Totally unfair

Infatuation
Does not lead to relation
It is one sided love
And no one shall give credence or believe

One may try to build nest
Dream as much as he thinks best
But it shall be called tragic
As it lacks basic

When it is known
No fancy should be flown
Either in air or run on the ground
As nothing shall be gathered to go around

You are unaware
And knows not to go where
It is better not to weave
But in reality to believe

You shall be leading dreamer’s life
And consider the journey like an edge of knife
It may prove like hard rock
You may turn impatient and run out of stock

Expect nothing in desert
But see only illusion as an art
Nobody, so far, has built castle in the air
If so, then it shall be considered totally unfair

Totally Unfair
Sunday, November 22, 2015
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 November 2015

Aha building castles 1 hour ago by Samphresia Entalia | Reply

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 November 2015

Ranjana Patel But sometimes we love dreaming! Making a castle. Of sand! Its a wonderfull feeling! This is called love :) Unlike · Reply · 1 · 56 mins · Edited 28 minutes ago

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Ratnakar Mandlik 22 November 2015

Beautiful poem with philosophical touch and weight age of experience. However, unfair infatuation be, it victimizes majority of people, though for a while, during youth. Enjoyed the poem. Thanks for sharing the other side of the coin.10 points.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 22 November 2015

Expect nothing in desert But see only illusion as an art Nobody, so far, has built castle in the air If so, then it shall be considered totally unfair

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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