Touch A Dream Poem by Peter S. Quinn

Touch A Dream

Rating: 4.4


Touch a dream
let it come our way;
like fresh river stream
so we'll be okey.
Nothing comes easy
in this life that goes on
times are a bit breezy
and struggles never done.

Touch a dream
give it some your days
when everything seem
just colored in grays.
All I am here saying
it dosen't need to be so,
we are all here staying
on the same lives row.

Touch a dream
and give it your try,
life is awards and deem
I don't know why.
Everything comes and goes
into the ways of life,
just like the wind blows
give it your strife.

Wednesday, February 22, 2023
Topic(s) of this poem: Life,struggle,dream
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 22 February 2023

Beautifully inked. Loved reading it. Thanks.

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Masoud Azadbakht 23 February 2023

very good

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Gbadamosi Afeez Lanre 10 July 2023

This poem seems like a warning to dreamers. Touch it, that is keep it handy, because time is breezy, just like a bubble

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JOHN THE GIFTED HANDS 21 May 2023

Excellent creativity reminds me of memories

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Daniel Ukwe 03 March 2023

Nice and precise with a touch of heartfelt thought

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Rob Lamberton 27 February 2023

Times are a bit breezy!

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Gabriel Oluwalana 23 February 2023

Wow! Metaphorical.5-star for you.

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