* Touch Of Fire Poem by Eyan Desir

ooopppsssss, so romantic ha.. this is intensity 8 like the earthquake in chile like the hotness in phili it reach to 39 degree... the hotness represents red where it shows desires hope love is within the two not only to touch the fire romance is a sacred gesture as to love is never been a joke woman submits herself to the man she loves most this piece is nicely done hope after doing this piece ur still ok hmmm, if not just take a break dont drink hot, make a cold tea... and to the author, ur piece is nicely done..lavs ya...smileeeeee

A thousand worlds can be written in a numerous ways as long as you get the message across. Words are words with plenty of sounds, guess what brother, you have successfully written the words and in my mind, I have the sounds to match the words, nevertheless you got the message across...Great job, you are very talented, you got your way and it is okay....to the top, you are on your way...10+++Love and Peace...

your poem does incorporate a touch of fire. your last stanza excellent

Hike and hype of adrenaline androgen and feminine hormone molecules…interplayed nicely and…finally hushed up and hanged up...Omigod its physiological rule…vivid and voluptuous…thanks for sharing 10/10 Ms. Nivedita UK

Flowers dance I can imagine this..it's amazing..beautifully written..

wow...like always..your writting is amazing

Romantic composition. Well presented. Good structure too. Nice one.