Tranquility Poem by ramesh rai

Serene souls find serenity in Nature.

Lovely effort here. Sometimes I do just this: write one for the sake of prompting a restful spirit. One such of mine was – The Cat Stretches Out His Length – Adeline May I suggest: since 'fertile' is already active, it does not need an ‘s’. Also there is no e in sprouts. The poem itself is lovely and relaxing.

Tranquility is a sense of well being and peace. Without this nature, humans, and animals would have a hard time existing on earth. Peace to you my brother. A nice write.

Great admiration of the Tranquil Nature!

Dear blessed bard, your version of imaginations and passions on tranquility demands still worthy adoration. this verse leaves ample room for sensible interpretations and beautiful additions. Request you to edit it, after having blessed those lines with your views from a different wilderness of thoughts. God Bless. (see if you can bless me too with a review. i have just posted a few lines next to yours, please consider. rgds) tajudeen shah