Lawrence S. Pertillar

Gold Star - 16,200 Points (February/'47 / Connecticut, USA)

Treats To Nibble - Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

The picture long revealed to be exposed,
And is far from subliminal...
With depictions unhidden,
But some who view are fixed on bits of it.
To be routinely comforted while feeding addictions,
As visions affixed dance to their pleasing of habits.

Petty pushers limited to insights condoned,
Express no interest in the frame...
Or the picture to them shown.
Arguments increase between the ones blindsided,
And those undeniably connecting to reality.
But choices made to feed upon treats to nibbled and eat,
Has successfully blocked a thought process stopped!


Comments about Treats To Nibble by Lawrence S. Pertillar

  • Gold Star - 8,890 Points Douglas Scotney (11/27/2013 6:18:00 PM)

    It's probably necessary to let thought process stop and rest, but therein lies the danger (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, November 27, 2013



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