(2/21/1996- / olean new york)

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Trial By Fire

Spare me your lies
And your transparent tears 
You grieve not your crimes,
You've lost track of your sins

You didnt think twice
As the words left your lips
To end my short life,
Send me to the crypts

Your wish was in vain
I refused to give up
And you gave me your love
Though it came with a knife

 Death disobeyed you,
Wouldn't heed your call
When you tried to burn me,
Destruction set me free

The flames made me strong,  
A reborn child of pain
Don't call yourself a mother!
How dare you make that claim?

Submitted: Tuesday, June 26, 2012
Edited: Wednesday, June 27, 2012


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  • Chris Cariad (6/28/2012 2:22:00 PM)

    this poem is extremely deep. I love your style.

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  • Danny Draper (6/28/2012 4:21:00 AM)

    This is powerful and sad with a strong and defiant ending, good write.

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  • Shouvik Roy (6/27/2012 3:57:00 PM)

    woh..powerful indeed...liked the way you wrote it..keep penning

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  • Darkangel Flyfree (6/27/2012 9:58:00 AM)

    Wow very powerful and intense poem Joyce. I love it! ! !

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  • Theo Williams (6/26/2012 11:46:00 PM)

    Wow this poem is very deep.
    Spare me your lies
    And your transparent tears
    You grieve not your crimes
    You've lost track of your sins.
    My favourite lines just so powerful and really captivated my feelings toward those lines. Very strong write. :)

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