Tribute - Dinosaur Haiku Poem by john tiong chunghoo

Tribute - Dinosaur Haiku

Rating: 5.0


on the slippery back
of your remains
we roam the world

such a huge blessing
even in death,
you help drive the world

in death too
we roam the world
with you on our wheels

what a huge blessing!
your remains it oils
the world's progress

one day
we would fight over
your remains
inking ourselves
oily thick black

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 02 June 2011

Great poem with brilliant imagery and wonderful style. I rate it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'A humble complaint' on page 2.

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john tiong chunghoo

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Sibu, Sarawak, Borneo East Malaysia
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