Triple Back Flip Poem by David Darbyshire

Triple Back Flip

Rating: 5.0


You know when you feel like
your standing on a sinking ship
what you should be doing is,
a triple back flip

You know when your on an escalator
and the roller stops,
but you still feel like your going down.
Smile and do little bunny hops

When your feeling blue and defeated
and you feel like you have been cheated
Try and be a little cheerful, or grateful
Because what you have, you should be thankful

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Esther Leclerc 08 June 2006

Dave! I needed this today! ! ! Can always count on you for a smile and more. Right: flip, hop and count your blessings. Got it! Thanks, Esther : ]

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Patricia Gale 08 June 2006

Good advice to all. Patricia

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John Tiong Chunghoo 08 June 2006

dear dave love the subtle yet comic undertones, regards, john.

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