douglas scotney

Silver Star - 4,300 Points (boomer / Toowoomba, Queensland, Australia. Resides in Adelaide)

Trois Amis - Poem by douglas scotney

'Je voudrais accomplir
beaucoup plus qu'avant,
mais, tres tristesse,
le plus j'essaie,
le plus je perds la tresse.'

'...le plus je perds la presse.'

'...le plus je serre les fesses.'


Poet's Notes about The Poem

....Three Friends

'I would so like to do
much more than before,
but, great despair,
the more I try
the more I lose my hair.'

'the more I lose the crowd, '

'the more I clench my pair.'

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  • Rookie Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/22/2012 12:21:00 AM)

    triste fera mieux que tristesse pour un rhyme inutile (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 21, 2012

Poem Edited: Monday, October 22, 2012


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