Even if it sounds like true
even if samanyan believes it to be true
would Paraman [god] find it true
if in your pooja [prayer]
you would read out verses to him
he would'nt listen
he would say...sing your song
in your own word and voice
bring out the truth in you
in the rest....in the rest..he would say
i dont see you....
you donot show up TRUE.
There's a saying be true to your deeds and they will also be true to you........Beautiful poem written with depth meaning! ! ! 10++
flowing with truth concepts flowing with depth... thoughts' provoking write... evokes us to reflect 10++
more wisdom revealed in this poem...and yes if it quacks like a duck...and looks like duck....it isn't always a duck....
to be true is just fine but to tell no lies, i think, there are some who can't manage..naizz
Only God knows what is true for He alone can discern the thoughts and intents of our hearts. Fascinating write. Kind regards, Sandra
Paraman (God) is inside one's heart. One should look for Him inward and not outward.
So true..God cannot be pleased by words alone.He can foresee the truth behind every thought n action n that's all that matters....very meaning write.....Sir i m not rating ur poems coz as usual ythey r beyond 10...: -)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
samanyan, It is remarkable poem. when somebody pray with own words and it is sincere a voice, I think that this a pray, god will listen...10... Thank you for the your kind comment... Best wishes, Tsira