True Illumination. Poem by Sandra Feldman
True Illumination.
You cut life,
Thin, thin, thin
You trod along
Trying to,
Win, win, win
You want to find
A love that will
Respond,
To tired souls
So that you don't
Have to cut
Life's road,
Thin, thin, thin
A melody is played
Afar,
It's calling,
Like a shining star
You try to capture
Its avatar,
An incantation
From afar,
And there you go,
Finally knowing
That all that travels,
May not reach
Its port
And that life Is,
Infernal, gravel
Without
Love's constant
True, support.
Beautiful poem so discerning. Great thoughts to ponder about.
Yes Sandra i agree with you completely. Without love life is unimaginable in fact unlivable. Every moment we have to work things out ehich need love to see the best in them. Good composition.
A loveliest honest poem but very thought- provoking poem for me personally, thinking along in the flow of the reading, so is life, I reckon, I have enjoyed enormously,5 stars full Thank you so much for sharing dear Sandra.
Dear Sandra, Your poems are always powerful with a strong message.5 stars
The many intricacies of love and life woven and expressed powerfully.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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This is amazing poem, to all beautiful brims, excellently rendered and Beautifully thought. I have found BEAUTY in your words dearest Sandra.5 Stars Fullest on TOP.