Treasure Island

Jhustin Sanao

(august 26 1993 / Quezon City)

True Love


When I first saw you
You totally blew me away
With your beautiful face and gorgeous smile
It feels like love at first sight

Having you beside me
Makes me a better man
You always bring out the best in me
And that’s one of the many thing I like about you

But some people are suffering because of our love
And I know that I’m the one to blame
Because they say that I’m not good enough for you
That I’m not perfect for you

I know that you don’t want me to go
And I know that you love me just the way I am
But I want you to have the best
For that I need to be the best

Even though fate is breaking us apart
I swear I will never forget you
Because when I think of you
I don’t feel that I’m alone

I just wish we could freeze the moments were together
All the happy memories we had
All the sweetest moment in our life
Even the worst thing we’ve been through

But for now I want to break-up with you
Not because I don’t love you because I do
I just want you and those people to see that I could be perfect for you
That we are meant to be together

I am asking you if you could wait for me
I promise that when I come back
I will prove to you and to those people that I’m perfect for you
I just want you to believe in me

Submitted: Sunday, April 25, 2010
Edited: Monday, June 27, 2011

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  • Nicanor P. Tiosen (2/2/2014 6:47:00 PM)

    There is always a right time. Perhaps, now you may not yet be prepared but soon enough you will be ready to fight it out agains anyone who may try to dissuade you. (Report) Reply

  • Musfiq Us Shaleheen (11/17/2012 12:51:00 AM)

    After reading your poem, its reminds me a long before and want to say wordless tune but endless rhythm.
    its so simple but expressed the love what we feel every moment.
    i will read more. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (11/15/2012 12:18:00 AM)

    after reading your poem i feel like love at first sight. brilliant write my frnd. keep it up. may god bless you (Report) Reply

  • So Close (11/15/2012 12:08:00 AM)

    true feelings...from the words I can realize that how hard your love....and how sad you are, at the time of writing this poem...I really enjoyed it! ! !

    »so close« (Report) Reply

  • Philo Yan (11/14/2012 11:50:00 PM)

    I think what you have written comes from a genuine place in your heart. Keep writing and try to get a smoother flow or rhythm. (Report) Reply

  • Shahana mahazin (11/27/2011 11:45:00 AM)

    i just wish we could freeze the moments were together..

    i liked it...simple..poem wth simple words.. (Report) Reply

  • Adam Omar (7/14/2011 3:09:00 AM)

    They seem more like prose than poetic to me. The message though is painful & it captures emotion which is vital. (Report) Reply

  • Clara Odelia Ciutara (7/13/2011 8:40:00 AM)

    hey..i like this poem..
    somehow you wrote it very truly about true love and the feeling we feel about it.. nice poem :) (Report) Reply

  • Ineffable Kebbs (3/28/2011 10:58:00 AM)

    it reads like a compilation of different lines from these popular love songs idea of ur itention is there but lacks in originality (Report) Reply

  • Yoseph Lupu (3/28/2011 7:49:00 AM)

    I like your wriiting!
    you have to shorten your lines, so we can feel the rhyme /musicof the poem..for example..as I found not with much thought:

    'some people, are sad of our love,
    I know, that I am the one to bleme,
    they say, I'm not so good for you
    even not, so perfect too.'

    you don't neet to put heavy words!

    continue writting...you are good! (Report) Reply

  • Kameron K (3/16/2011 10:34:00 AM)

    Is this personal? Or just made up? It's really good either way. Good job. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (9/24/2010 2:10:00 PM)

    full of romance and pain
    pain and love
    acceptance and giving away for the sake of love
    nice poem thank u for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Dove Allen (8/30/2010 10:05:00 AM)

    Another look at a poem allows one to 'see' again with different eyes...see previous comment I made Jhustin...but I will expand my thought again to give you the encouragement you need. Letting the beloved go...is a gesture of 'real' love.Sometimes we have to accept that there is no future in some desires. Let life guide your heart and know when the time is right...you will fulfill your dreams...best wishes on your 'journey of love'! :) Nice heartfelt poem! (Report) Reply

  • Ken E Hall (8/17/2010 6:16:00 AM)

    True love could not be better, a true love poem fron the heart +++10
    regards (Report) Reply

  • Jenny Gordon (8/15/2010 10:18:00 PM)

    Sounds so real. And so romantically hopeful. I daresay if she loves him, she will wait for him. (Report) Reply

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