True Love Is Not Disguised Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

True Love Is Not Disguised

Rating: 5.0


If you are here to experience life,
Believing love to be sugarcoated...
Without some of it being emotionally
Noted with bitterness received at times.
Delivered with disagreement.
Expect decay!
Because one day you are going to awaken
With a false reality you have accepted.
And nothing is going to please that need,
You are going to hunger to taste.
And nothing is going to satisfy,
What you have denied inside.
Hiding is not going to attract it to you,
Since all of you is not in view!
And true love is not diguised for masquerades.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Delilah Miller 03 December 2007

I think you're absolutely right. Truthful, vivid poem as always. deserve more than a 10, deserves a book. X's and O's

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