Try 2 (Plus & Minus) Poem by Kelvin Owusu

Try 2 (Plus & Minus)

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Implant a positive thought
dive, worth a shot, try
way of the will
a will, a way, sacrifice, endure pain
if to gain, heartaches rivers
through the storm to obtain

experience, knowledge
mistakes, lessons
steps back, steps forward
listen, observe
follow, lead

knowledge is the key
the mind is the door way
to know, to learn, one must try
open the mind
allow more then positives to sink in
life's lessons derive
from hardships and mistakes
welcome the negatives

collect lessons, discard the rest
negatives lie dormant in positives
positives lie dormant in negatives

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ilaria Boffa 24 December 2012

I loved the flow of your thoughts in this piece! thank you.

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Nader Baheri 19 October 2012

what a beautiful ending.i agree with u.the more knowledge we gain the more positive we can be. muchas gracias for sharing

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Stevie Taite 17 October 2012

love this. Wise words. A really positive poem to lift the spirit!

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