Life dwells in mind
And mind dwells in life
Truth lives in time
Time moves in truth
Water comes from ocean
Ocean carries water
Sky covers as veil
Earth wears sky as veil
Zeal comes in mind
Mind proceeds with zeal
We feel love in work
Work carries love more
Relationship needs love
Love defines relationship
I know you twist right
I twist left and see
You are right in track
This is perception
That indicates about life
Turning to right we feel
Turning to right we see
Turning to right we work
On pillars of right we stand.
As always a nice poem. Enjoyable and educative due to twists to the right and left in it as also philosophic perceptions. Thanks for sharing. Ten points.
Mesmerised with opening lines itself: Life dwells in mind, And mind dwells in life..... So is the ending: Turning to right we work, On pillars of right we stand....Well composed poem Sir.
Relationship needs love. To hit the nail right on the head! Nice work. Thanks for sharing.
This is full of wisdom! Each line sounds like a epigram! ! A sure 10
... what a line, life is a relationship so true wishing all the star to see the light, seems easy and fulfilling, you have made the world real and sober in spirit your such a relation to other my friend.Thank you and God bless,
Turning to right we feel Turning to right we see Turning to right we work On pillars of right we stand. Wonderful.
........very nicely penned...and very inspiring ★ Water comes from ocean Ocean carries water
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A juxtaposition of life and nature and the coalescence of right