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(23 9 1940 / Haverhill Suffolk England)

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Twilight

Turn your eye
and don't look back,
the littered past
is long and black.

A twisted key?
A twisted lock?
A twist of fate...
a mental block?

An ever cautious
mind moves on,
translates, then darkens,
thrives upon
its own oppression
deep and stark,
yet yearning for
the lively spark.

Submitted: Saturday, March 30, 2013


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  • Lucifera Santez (8/3/2013 2:39:00 AM)

    a very good write.
    :)

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  • Hazel Durham (5/29/2013 10:14:00 AM)

    Let the past take care of itself, keep moving forward with passion and hope! !
    Excellent write! !

  • Paul Brookes (4/21/2013 3:44:00 AM)

    |Look back not with regret but boldly forward with hope. Great poem Thanks for sharing

  • Thomas A Robinson (4/14/2013 7:17:00 AM)

    Oh those nasty twists of fate, did you ever wonder how you got to here?
    A littered past... all those days or just tossed dreams?
    A mental block? ... a cautious mind? An ever vigilant mind?
    Thriving on it's own oppresive dark thoughts?
    Perhaps... maybe... or just once too many times burned by those
    sparks of lively joy.

  • Kevin Halls (3/31/2013 3:44:00 PM)

    A very deep poem Sally but interesting and thought provoking.

  • Valerie Dohren (3/30/2013 5:55:00 PM)

    Brilliant poem Sally, reflecting on the past is often painful. Really good write.

  • Alexander Coppedge (3/30/2013 5:40:00 AM)

    well written beautiful verse excellent art

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