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Two ships apart

The lonely saga
of this journey
upheaved in troubled
waters and seldom
silent in deep sea
very many hurricanes
crossed without
stopping the sail.

The other voyage
full of aspirants
to partner the
solitary queen sang
the war song
dreaming up to
touch the ferry
without fail.

Racing each other
the warriors
fiercely battled
neglecting the
ravages of time
brushing aside
until the loner
wrecked in hail.

Submitted: Sunday, July 26, 2009
Edited: Monday, October 19, 2009

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  • Flames Of Desire Consumed By The Fire (12/20/2009 4:12:00 PM)

    A cool story and rather adventurous, as well, or so I thought. It has enough imagery to dwell on. Nice work.

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  • Dorothy- A. Holmes (10/19/2009 1:35:00 PM)

    Mubeen,

    I loved the passion of this poem, it is beautiful...yet I am reminded of something once told to me many years ago, 'Things that hurt, instruct...'


    Dorothy
    A Poet Who Loves To Sing

    I would love to have you visit and read some of my works...and comment...if time allows.

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  • Ben Turner (10/14/2009 5:28:00 PM)

    great poem beautiful imagry keep up the good work

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  • Opeyemi Borisade (10/13/2009 8:46:00 AM)

    Aptly written, lovely presented...Good job Mubeen.

    Regards

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  • tay the girl you never knew (10/13/2009 8:42:00 AM)

    thnx 4 lettin me read this.....i liked it alot
    ~taylor

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  • DaNa XxX (10/13/2009 8:33:00 AM)

    beautiful poem...! and really interisting title to..!
    thanks for sharing..

    DaNa...

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  • Bob Blackwell (10/12/2009 11:47:00 AM)

    Interesting poem..............

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  • Sherri Coulter (9/21/2009 2:48:00 PM)

    two ships apart...it is the art of sway 10/10

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/27/2009 10:09:00 AM)

    neglecting the
    ravages of time
    brushing aside
    until the loner
    wrecked in hail....collison resulting in wrackage.. it is quaite interesting to note....10

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  • Kafil Uddin Raihan (8/4/2009 10:43:00 AM)

    Yap, We love each other.....We destroy each other...we are the man of variation....

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