Mubeen Sadhika


Two Ships Apart - Poem by Mubeen Sadhika

The lonely saga
of this journey
upheaved in troubled
waters and seldom
silent in deep sea
very many hurricanes
crossed without
stopping the sail.

The other voyage
full of aspirants
to partner the
solitary queen sang
the war song
dreaming up to
touch the ferry
without fail.

Racing each other
the warriors
fiercely battled
neglecting the
ravages of time
brushing aside
until the loner
wrecked in hail.


Comments about Two Ships Apart by Mubeen Sadhika

  • Rookie Flames Of Desire Consumed By The Fire (12/20/2009 4:12:00 PM)

    A cool story and rather adventurous, as well, or so I thought. It has enough imagery to dwell on. Nice work. (Report) Reply

    1 person liked.
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  • Veteran Poet - 1,675 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (10/19/2009 1:35:00 PM)

    Mubeen,

    I loved the passion of this poem, it is beautiful...yet I am reminded of something once told to me many years ago, 'Things that hurt, instruct...'


    Dorothy
    A Poet Who Loves To Sing

    I would love to have you visit and read some of my works...and comment...if time allows. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ben Turner (10/14/2009 5:28:00 PM)

    great poem beautiful imagry keep up the good work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Opeyemi Borisade (10/13/2009 8:46:00 AM)

    Aptly written, lovely presented...Good job Mubeen.

    Regards (Report) Reply

  • Rookie tay the girl you never knew (10/13/2009 8:42:00 AM)

    thnx 4 lettin me read this.....i liked it alot
    ~taylor (Report) Reply

  • Rookie DaNa XxX (10/13/2009 8:33:00 AM)

    beautiful poem...! and really interisting title to..!
    thanks for sharing..

    DaNa... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (10/12/2009 11:47:00 AM)

    Interesting poem.............. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sherri Coulter (9/21/2009 2:48:00 PM)

    two ships apart...it is the art of sway 10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 68,169 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/27/2009 10:09:00 AM)

    neglecting the
    ravages of time
    brushing aside
    until the loner
    wrecked in hail....collison resulting in wrackage.. it is quaite interesting to note....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 1 Points Kafil Uddin Raihan (8/4/2009 10:43:00 AM)

    Yap, We love each other.....We destroy each other...we are the man of variation.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ted M (7/28/2009 10:21:00 AM)

    That's the pity, human beings destroy each other in the name of war. presented well. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 77 Points Surya . (7/27/2009 9:16:00 AM)

    beautiful poem.well worded.last para fantastic in finish.
    'Racing each other
    the warriors
    fiercely battled
    neglecting the
    ravages of time
    brushing aside
    until the loner
    wrecked in hail. '
    voted 10
    sury (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 26, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, October 19, 2009


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